Black Poetry : CHECK PLEASE!!!!!

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  1. reggaediva

    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking in the mirror and what do I see?
    A beautiful black woman,
    that just so happens to be lonely.
    I have the qualified resume to be someones wife
    But it seems to me that guys are not looking for that it their life.
    So am I suppose to wait until one of them are ready.
    Yo I feel like some highschool chic
    waiting for the guy to ask me to go steady.
    I find myself doing many things to keep my mind from wondering.
    But sooner or later "Why am I without" is what I start pondering.
    I know I will find love sooner or later.
    Hell it ain't like I'm picky
    Long as he is good to me and my son and exclude the bull$%*.
    I'll even take a waiter.

    CHECK PLEASE!
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like the endin on this one, sistah. I know what ya mean - been lookin for love a while myself. But things happen when they're supposed to and when you're ready. Patience is hard as hell though, isn't it. Peace, girl.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with gempis that the ending is tight. Just believe that he's out there and keep living life in the mean time, other great things can and will happen.
     
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    nice one..on point ..feeling this
    all in the flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. reggaediva

    reggaediva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jah
    thank so much for support. my patience is running thin. I don't know what else is there for me to do. but just chill out.

    JAH DIVA :thanks:
     
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    aahhhhhh I enjoyed this drop creative flow lady... ;)
     
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    MsBashay New Member MEMBER

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    When you get the good you want. you will say he was worth the wait. so just hold on a minute.
    :heart:
     
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    He will soon come...

    Like they say, patience is a virtue.

    It's when impatience controls U, U settle 4 whatever & that whatever will make U lonely, even though U have.

    Nice piece.
     
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