Black Poetry : Check it, tell me whatcha think

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  1. Take=it=2=ya

    Take=it=2=ya Member MEMBER

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    Im screwing up your thought system
    I never missinem
    Hurten your spirit
    So hard that I be put in cuffs and sent to prison
    I hear every thing you say when you speak
    You dont make sents plus your rhyme is embarrasingly weak
    If I were you I would leave the scene right now
    find a hiding spot under ground
    Where you’ll never be found even if you were loud
    My rhymes may be a tiny bit overboard, its obserd
    But that’s where im throwin you and I can garentee that its going to hert
    Now im yelling at you as the crowd laughs histarically
    It isnt funny its pretty damb sad you cant come back at me and snack on me
    Or snap at me im rhymin rapidly its quite nasty
    But can you blame them?
    I know that I would laugh at you too
    Your face is cherry red
    Your sweating buckets from the head
    Your pants are wet screw takin a polaroid
    This is something I will never forget never forget
    I just made you wish we never met
    Now Im’a jet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmmm!

    nicely done poet....write dem words
     
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