Black Poetry : Chat Room / Panic Room

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hypnotize, Apr 24, 2002.

  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Autumn caught 'em , see all them leaves must fall down

    ... growing old.

    I haven't writtin a poem in so long,

    literary footsteps creaking the old stairs, chasing me.

    Panic room - elbow room - breathing room

    all on the second floor of the same house, to me.

    " I tried to not look at that white girls' butt "

    " I tried to not chat where you told me not to chat "

    But both of those pointless passtimes have a weird
    allure - some sort of flat end that justifies what it means
    ... to stray from what is native.

    The only part of the flag that waves is the
    part farthest from the pole ...
    meaning the only cure for STRAYING is STAYING.

    I haven't been in love in soooo long , ...
    it's been so long , that I Almost like being in the
    bed better when it's just me.

    Room to Panic. Room for Elbows . Room to Breathe.


    Your broken heart beats in two places - your face is red.

    I'm sorry - **** ! I TOLD YOU i had to re-learn
    how to write poems , how to be in love.
    But you forced my hand ... and it landed on a keyboard.

    And she doesn't chat like that ... I just love talking to her.

    You're always in poems and in love ... why don't you
    understand ?

    Everybody Watch Your Hands ! ... the door is closing.



    This is not me choosing HER room in HER house but ...

    I know you love me and you mean well but ...


    Look, I can't live in a " home " that has a room to be trapped in.
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    HYPO
    feeling the story line dun
    and been there
    for real
    peace as always
    ain't nothing changed
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyght flow as u know i be into ya flow
    like da man said nothing changed
     
  4. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sup ya'll

    Brooknaw and Chicago - Ya'll are lucky.

    Glad to be welcomed back in the fold,
    I'm happy ya'll guys can relate.
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    INTRIGUING!

    I have not read much of your work.
    But, I will now!
    I enjoyed this loosley woven yet pulled
    together piece that leaves so much open
    for interpretation.
    It was intriguing and a wonderful read.
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Hypnotize ... Enjoyed this peace Sweetie ...

    Wanted to let you know too that we have a new chat room:

    http://www.destee.com/chat

    The old one will be dying soon. :(

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. OLMEC

    OLMEC Active Member MEMBER

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    RENAISSANCE!!!!!HOLD TIGHT!!!!!
    Glass City Represent!!!!

    You need some love hpyno
    the type that smells like a girl
    know what i'm saying...lol

    you should have read this yesterday!

    PEACE
     
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