Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, May 19, 2004.
WooooWeeee! This Refreshingly Tight!
I love the way you flowed it down on "paper" too.
...beholding my swollen clouds of sinless passion.
My, my, my. Gurl I believe you dun outdid yo self.
WOW WOW WOW WOW. DANG GIRL!!!!!!!!!!! I'M DIGGING THIS RELENTLESSLY. YOU'VE JUST INSPIRED ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And sometimes the love is just brimming to the point where it overflows, and will he be there waiting to be caught in that shower? You didn't need a lot of words to convey this feeling, because every word you did use seemed to be painstakingly placed.
lovin ya style flow on i'm listening
very tight drop
I can only say...you have power...over words...
...like "The Secret Storm" ...
with words like this...
you can hover over me anytime...lol
very nice sista...very nice indeed
This is a nice poem.
Thanks family for the support on this piece,
trying out some new styles, playing, having
some fun with poetry...on my journey of
self actualization as a "Soul Scribe"...
Much love xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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