Quiet Poetry Lounge : Chasing Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by tHE kodak, Sep 12, 2012.

  1. tHE kodak

    tHE kodak Member MEMBER

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    We hold on as the street car slows,

    I’d regret if my balance slipped away,

    Sunny September day,

    My eyes involved with her lips,

    No window seats today,

    Who knew the trees could hate,

    Along with the constant sounds of cars in the way,

    Time is calculated by how much time I can wait,

    The Heart is calm but my mind is ecstatic,

    Day dreaming of her skin against the fabrics,

    In love we conquer, Without it we develop,

    The habit of chasing the feeling to have never grasped it,

    Seems like I enjoy the accelerated paces,

    I smile when I see the various familiar faces,

    Playing the guessing game up until my destination,

    A crowded trolley takes away your patience,

    All I see is arms when everything becomes faceless,

    Blinded by tourist and the everyday language,

    She left from me with traces of her fragrance,

    A queen to my conscience without having a conversation.
     
  2. Destee

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    :hello: tHE kodak ... Welcome Welcome Welcome ... :wave:

    Thanks for joining us and sharing! :toast:

    Beautiful poetry, it seems to take place in many different places, all at the same time!

    Great Work! Please make yourself at home, because you are!

    Much Love and Peace.

    :heart:

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  3. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Stunning capture. Really engaging read. Ive experienced this.
     
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    tHE kodak Member MEMBER

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    Thank you. Glad I could share. Hopefully I can build and contribute more when I have the time. Feeling at home already!
     
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    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    nice. I appreciate the lightness and the musicality of this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within the poetic house of destee.com
    this was awesomely done great write do continue
     
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