Black Poetry : Charlie Brown

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  1. monad.poetress

    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Charlie Brown
    By Monad.poetress

    My son is such a cutie (to me he looks like the little black version of Charlie Brown...so I call him Charlie Brown)


    His smiling face is all I need
    to brighten my day and let God lead
    His little round eyes just sparkle at me
    My little Charlie Brown just sets me free

    What did I do to deserve his smile
    My little Charlie Brown....my only child
    His little round eyes make my heart skip a beat
    All my anger his little smile defeats
    I love my Charlie Brown he can always make me laugh
    He helps to guide my life down the right path

    Thank you Charlie Brown
    for all you do for me
    I Love you Charlie Brown
    Your love is all I see
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    monad.poetress,
    This is an inspired expression of the Blessings of the Creator....
    who makes no mistakes
    nice job sharing your feelings and blessing with us.....

    Peace and Blessings
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His little round eyes make my heart skip a beat
    All my anger his little smile defeats



    this part sets the whole scribe on :flame: and keep doing what you doing cuz like gravy-----------it's all good......one love
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh gurl! This poem made me wish I could see a picture of your son. The love of a mother for her son is so beautifully expressed. God has certainly blessed you in many ways with him.

    ...brightening mommy's day :sand:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful poem my sister
    thanks for sharing ya little joy with us
    Angel
     
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    this just filled my heart so...
    there is nothing more wonderful
    than the "smile" and love of a child
    nothing that precious in the world, by far

    Makes you believe, there's still good in the world...

    Inside a childs eyes...


    Beautiful Peace :spinstar:
     
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    Oh, this just made me smile! The light that a child brings to one's life. This piece was just brimming with love.
     
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