Black Poetry : ~~~~ Charles ~~~~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Sep 25, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awesome... any way you spell it!
     
  3. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    thank u

    You were
    Mind-******* me
    With your poetry
    We
    Intimately
    Shared notions
    Developing potions
    In you’re cooking pot
    Using those voodoo recipes
    To capture me
    Sexing me
    Phonetically
    And I can’t believe
    That we connected
    Subjected to your lyrics
    Singing
    That’s my song
    So as long…
    As you have the Mic, go on and on
    My mind is strong
    And it will keep on running
    Mind-*******
    Meeeeee
    Ready to accept what you have given’
    Although
    You may not know
    That I have been living
    The same life
    I understand your hidden subjects
    I want to discuss mind-sets
    Without using tongues or lips
    So mind **** me
    Mind-**** me
    Baby
    Mind-**** me
    Caught up in a net
    Thoughts getting wet
    Let’s set
    The stage with your voice
    Engaging
    Carefully selecting
    Your words of choice
    With your prose you were
    Was, is and will be
    See
    You were mentally
    Emotionally and physically
    Engraving scenes from your memories
    Into my view
    Showing what was true to you
    So keep on doing
    What it is you do
    Stay in control
    Keep on stroking my mind
    I look up as our thoughts collide
    I’m ready as you finish
    To go on another ride
    Awestruck
    Anticipating my next orgasm
    From your mind-****
    :hearts1: :bullseye:
     
  4. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaah the poet soul stringer is back and doing her thing1 Nice drop sage I enjoyed the whole flow. Don't be stingy give us more :angel1: Sage
     
  5. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You have done it again!!! This was POETRY, plain and simple. It is creative, expressive and written oh so well....keep doin' ya thing so my eyes will have something beautiful to witness. Thank you for blessing the board with this one!!!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...You flowed with that name for all it is worth, and then some...I think that you just may have made that name scream...Flow on sis, flow on...:)
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

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    Awesome drop!!!!!! flow head on!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful scribing and the feelings from it was sweet
     
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    You're
    :spinstar: un :spinstar: touchable :spinstar:
     
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    Good lord! What words can I use here that won't sound trite. I can think of none, sister, except to say: you are the best. Hands down, the very best.
     
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