Black Poetry : Character Assassination

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Frustration swings like a pendulum,
    rocking me from side to side with
    slow bits of anger and daft refusal.
    The war rages on as my carnal character
    wrestles, grapples and attacks that
    despicable morally conscious creature
    that is the other side of me; the one
    people approve of and is welcomed
    with trust into the lives of others.
    He angers me because he thwarts my
    libido and slices my virility at the cord,
    leaving me watering and panting hard,
    but defeated by such a puny force.
    My member is stiff with penetration power
    and desires and that attraction in my eyes and thighs.
    Just for the moment, for a minute, a nanosecond
    of pure penetration into her unknowing soul;
    deep, liquid and pressed against the bone
    feeling her pubis pulverized against my pubis,
    spinning a gradual slow dance of the flesh,
    feeling her radiation inside out, outside in
    her deeply, drained, emptied, sucked dry.
    An arid finish among flowing rivers,
    but the fight continues and libido is losing
    to a stronger character, despite my wishes and
    I find I cannot raise sufficient force to kill him.
     
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    don't fight the SELF in you...

    and never stiffle SELF by trying to be someone you're not. this could only lead to the exploding of self...or the killing of others out of the frustration of self. leave self along to be who self will be...and allow the libido to run free........

    yeal, you know the way.

    you always lay it down, Ra.

    peace.
     
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    whoa....

    anything i say will come out sounding jumbled and stupid...
    so it's best to just reamin speechless
    and sit here in ecstatic awe
    while i read this again


    *dancing in solar time*
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is hard

    I want to do wrong and I hate that side of me that cancels out my do wrong side, especially when it is what I want, but I cannot kill it--some times I wound it, but I can never kill it, and so, I keep fighting the fight trying to let my carnal side override my decent side knowing which ever side wins, I ultimately feel like I lost anyway--Ra
     
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    I'm stuck like chuck. Too nice...for what i could say...I still can't say...

    Cause I'm still stuck.
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't over do it!

    No reason--sometimes I just want to be bad!

    Ra
     
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    Awww go on....

    release ya id Ra!!!!! :laugh:

    Peace
    GQ
     
  8. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****! I never thought I could be good!

    I can't even be bad right! ****! Now that's messed up. How can I call myself the man who is afraid of now challenge when my "id" is held in check by my ego. I WANT TO BE BAD!!!! Dammit!

    Ra
     
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    man such strength
    such strength
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can't escape

    I guess you can only escape that early training for so long--Ra
     
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