Black Poetry : Character Assassination

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Frustration swings like a pendulum,
    rocking me from side to side with
    slow bits of anger and daft refusal.
    The war rages on as my carnal character
    wrestles, grapples and attacks that
    despicable morally conscious creature
    that is the other side of me; the one
    people approve of and is welcomed
    with trust into the lives of others.
    He angers me because he thwarts my
    libido and slices my virility at the cord,
    leaving me watering and panting hard,
    but defeated by such a puny force.
    My member is stiff with penetration power
    and desires and that attraction in my eyes and thighs.
    Just for the moment, for a minute, a nanosecond
    of pure penetration into her unknowing soul;
    deep, liquid and pressed against the bone
    feeling her pubis pulverized against my pubis,
    spinning a gradual slow dance of the flesh,
    feeling her radiation inside out, outside in
    her deeply, drained, emptied, sucked dry.
    An arid finish among flowing rivers,
    but the fight continues and libido is losing
    to a stronger character, despite my wishes and
    I find I cannot raise sufficient force to kill him.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this has me thinking !

    coz often i feel like this and some unknown taking control
    man u puttin' thangz on my mind dis morning!
    and i love it.......:toast:
     
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    RA

    YOU DEEP MAN NICE PIECE

    RA YOU REPRESENT THE PYRAMIDS

    I WONDER CAN YOU COMPLETE THIS NUMBER

    3 - 8 - ?

    3 IS THE UNIVERSAL NUMBER
    YOU KNOW THE TRIANGLE

    8 THE NUMBER OF INFINITY

    ? I BELIEVE TO BE THE NUMBER OF POLARITY
     
  4. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can't even remember my name

    from time to time--and I sure don't know the numbers, but I am familiar with them--Ra
     
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    Amun-ra.......

    Now this is a deep poem......is it really like that?


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fortunately--Yes!

    Unfortunately and fortunately, my better character wins out, but I certainly give in much thought--nevertheless, I had too much moral upbringing to step there, but I often want to but I lose this every time and sometimes I wish I wouldn't--of course I know that I would be sorry later- but!--oh well--that's the way it is.

    Ra
     
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