Black Poetry : Chapters

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  1. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So deeply I would gaze.
    Amazement that is you.
    Written ballads of life,
    seen in those dark pools.

    Flowing from your hand.
    Harsh tales that ride abound.
    A life unloved.
    Beautiful soul cast down.
    Long-lasting torment.
    Tears unshed.
    Broken spirit homeless.
    Wishing for an end.

    Love found its way.
    Regaining slow consciousness.
    A world cold and heartless.
    Slowly beats again.

    Promises made.
    Lips so tender.
    I turn the page.
    I have surrendered.

    My life given care.
    Ink spilling onto pages.
    Written by your will,
    You to guide me there.

    Dream of a love fulfilled.
    It is finally complete.
    Works to rival all works.
    Your love working within me.

    You, my future written.
    Tapestry weaved by faith.
    Belief instilled in me.
    You to fill the pages.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop as the ink continues
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!! Honestly....I REALLY like this...i am big on the choice of words thing, and you are GOOD at it :)....wow this was really GOOD...keep up the good work

    ---MzPoetic

    "Destiny is not a matter of chance, It is a matter of choice. It is not a thing to sit around and be waited for; it is a thing to be acheived"
     
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    as sweet as it gets uppin dis one again !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words were strategically woven into a work of art...wonderful.
     
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