Quiet Poetry Lounge : Chapter #II page #I her luv

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    Her love was me
    together so free
    warm sweet and divine
    she was depth
    beauty of sloopin shine
    my heart found her luv
    awaiting on da bankz

    I was stuck before dat hour
    in da present of such flower
    her luv was crystal shower
    cascading into my yet morrow
    wit a love so sudden & sweet
    her face in bloom and in feat
    thicken lips partaken treat
    she was my life's now complete

    I laid undone in my slumber
    my body refused to move
    my eyez peer unto her soul
    seem as midnight at noonday
    when her rapture came to play
    i couldn't see not one thing
    words through my eyes begun to sing
    her luv uplifting she bring
    I so loveth thee , she a never ending.


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    He came upon me
    with a current of such intensity
    no question that I would know
    the force of the ocean's flow
    Those sapphire waves
    carried me out to sea

    He took me further out each time
    in tides of love sublime
    The moon would control my fate
    in the midnight mist I'd contemplate
    Every inkling of his caress
    upon my nightly encounter

    The visions as I slept
    Softly cascading as he crept
    Buffering my mind with angels' wings
    Peacefully serenading, the love bird sings
    Some kind of Eden, some kind of bliss
    A blessing of peace is how I described this
    Held me within that moment
    Held me within that dimension
    I so loveth thee, he's a never ending.
     
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    Drifting beyond realism
    as i find myself inside her beings
    on a venture journey of love
    she was all i knew and wanted
    each time i awaken in sweat
    her image held me completely
    her envision held me softly

    I couldn't resist her rapture
    each measure was taken
    yet so far but so close
    my body trimbles in da wake of
    her everlasting sparkle
    as i drift cross da open sea
    uncontrolable love i vow
    for i only wish, what could be

    I wonder by my troth
    what thou and i did
    stuck on city pleasure
    lost into da maze of and if
    yet we loved as alwayz
    feeling by soul and heart
    yet eyez not see but knoweth
    she is there lone for thee
    and i so cometh in promises
    her luv i want openly
    that now leave me in tear to love



     
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    $$RICH$$:
    Another beautiful write.
    watz lovely flo back.
     
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    a melodic flow. enjoyed it immensely
     
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    Both know inwardly
    what happened when
    2 touched each other's
    souls, again and again
    Not every day that lives
    interconnect like a jigsaw
    Many questions, unanswered
    many feelings, raw

    Exposed emotions needed
    tender care
    Tending to the thirsty garden
    in the hopes that he'd be there
    to till and harvest
    The city has it's place
    but is no replacement
    for what still stirs inside

    What lies beneath the concrete
    is the fertile soil, complete
    with weeds and seeds
    waiting to breathe
    hoping that promises will take root
    without getting tangled
    She dreams through the night
    and longs for the day
    that the tears
    and fears
    are surmountable
     
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    Feeling the entry and the uplifting and the heavenly sensations.

    Thanks

    Desert Storm
     
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    Thank u 4EVERLUV

    Happy u enjoyed it sista MObetter

    again thankz sista watz

    hey DS thankz a million for da love
     
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