Black Poetry : Chaotic Thoughts

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  1. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Chaotic Thoughts

    Observe thundering waves
    crash upon a rocky shore,
    Hear the winds howl, tossing foam,
    pushing brown sands to frozen waves.
    Huddle against a smooth-worn rock
    and feel the trembling of the Earth
    with your tired, aching body.

    Should I end my life now,
    you ponder within:
    leave this darkened place?
    What use am I to this world that does not hear
    words I pour from my broken heart?

    Should I end my life-long dream
    of planting seeds of wisdom
    using the written word to touch
    hearts open to receive
    a million answers to their one question?

    Should I give up the struggle now;
    quench the fire that burns in my soul?
    I look up to see a white gull
    skimming the towering waves,
    up and down, sailing the currents,
    peacefully, gracefully, playfully
    as one with the wild winds, unafraid!

    Why couldn't I playfully navigate
    for another day at least, just one more day
    the chaotic madness of man's system
    and live to write just one more line?
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WindWalker

    Pondering questions....hmmmm, this is a **** good read!

    Thanks for bringin' this one into the fold!!

    N2
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!

    i love dis read u pose as i captured
    the depth of it inside.....walking on wind:D
     
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