Black Poetry : Channel Love @ 9:00 pm "Cum Laude Cum - The Scholar" (@9:30

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She graduated with a BA
    in "bare back riding"
    an MA in "Vocal expression"
    and a double PhD in
    the physiology of "epidermal
    release" and the psychology
    of "blowing my mind"

    I told her to teach me
    in five easy lessons
    what she learned through
    experience explain to
    me physically her dissertation
    in satisfaction and what I
    call "spasmareactive revelations"
    that's when you explain to your
    partner exactly what you learned
    when you came...I said
    explain all she knew to me as
    if I were a six year old...
    plus 26 more years...but break it
    down so I'd be (back)broke.

    she said "decline your posterior
    'til you reach a prone position"
    that meant "sit your *** down, flip, and
    lay on your stomach"
    I had never failed a class to this point
    and I didn't see any reason to now, so
    I sat,flipped, and layed on my stomach
    with caution...so I wouldn't snag my navel ring
    she proceeded to tell me that she
    was going to "propel a foamy lactose based
    entity that was glucose laced" on my back
    that meant she was going to spray whipped
    cream on my back...and she did
    I moaned because she dragged her tongue
    across my back as if my soul was missing
    and after the eleventh path she found
    it in her palm...purring

    she told me told me to "rotate myself
    180 degrees upon my horizontal plane"
    that meant turn over 'til I faced her
    I was in full attention and to relieve
    my tension she demonstrated page number
    27 on me...............................
    ****...****...****...I was speechless,
    I wrote her a note that she'd have to teach
    me how to talk again she signed to me "Okay"
    (you know thumb and forefinger, three fingers
    to the sky) she drew her name on
    my chest with..."see man" she was a scholar,
    to prove it she stroked me back to an attentive
    state and she road bare back across all
    city lines, I already speechless let my
    tears fall and morse code my emotions on the
    floor...she smiled and slowed sped up slowed
    sped up slowed 'til I had my voice back
    "the power of ***** is amazing" I thought
    at that point I told to "four point
    restrain herself without restraints"...oh,
    hold her arms and legs at the four corners
    of the bed and act as if she was tied up.
    ya see, being able to touch but being forbidden to
    touch can take you to an orgasmic high
    more potent than smoking sex in a leaf
    dipped in sweat...anyway before I end
    this confession of my essay submission
    I wore her pearl around the tip of
    my tongue and to this day she wants it
    back until then she'll forever be
    speaking french (Ooh ****, that s*** is good, etc.)
    that's all she remembers...but she still
    is the Cum Laude Cum of her graduating class.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BBBBBbbbbbBLAK~

    AWWW Hecky-Hecky Nawwwwww!!

    :tongue: I am awe-smacked
    with amazement....dannnng,
    brotha been holdin' out
    all along!!
    Got me sayin' my fav'rit
    line --
    "Harpo, you said dis hea r juke joynt"!!
    hee hee hee ~~
    Dis be da bomb -Blakman...
    and I'm quite sure you know I'm
    lovin' it all ova too!!
    :tongue: :tongue: :tongue:
     
  3. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak,

    Gots ta give ya ya own 5 black fists on this one!!!

    Excellent my brotha!!! Hella creative!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  4. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If i smoked cigarettes, i'd see the reason to smoke one now...
    You are truly gifted brotha...

    8th!
     
  5. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank ya'll for coming wit me on my journey into my head, if only for a moment...it felt good (at least that's what I told my teacher)

    one love,blak
     
  6. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew!!!

    i gotz to give it to ya blak!!!

    ur verbals leave me **** near comatose every time!!


    *slipping into darkness*
     
  7. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This HEAH
    Is how Night School was originally founded
    And Blak...
    You be the founder of Orgasmic Classes For Advanced
    Studies
    Passing grade is a "C" RIGHT? ;)

    This Schitt is soooooo TYYYYYYTEEEEE!!

    *back-to-school-sHUMPING*
     
  8. alyce

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    your command

    of the vernacular...your verbiage...

    SPECK TACKU LAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    whoa nah!

    A
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I take this one to the whoa :eeek:
    lol...lol,tyte blak....
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nita, Alyce, Hunter, StarGoddess,

    Queens!!! thank you. I'm happy that you enjoyed the piece (that sounds corny but it's sincere). Wait 'til you read the other "episodes".


    one love,blak
     
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