Black Poetry : Channel Love @ 8:30 pm "Orion's Osculation" (@ 9:00 pm "Cum Laude Cum - The Scholar)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She lay across
    fields of cotton
    250 count
    with the zodiac bowing
    at her feet / she had
    a way of seduction
    that would make Oshun
    Godiva and Venus green
    with envy / however she was
    a mocha goddess and
    all the constellations
    praised her / made love /
    and gave her /their children/
    her aura wed
    the offspring and I was witness
    to love marrying itself / myriad
    asexual moments later she
    gave birth to Orion...
    which grew one score plus
    a decade in years in several
    fleeting moments /I fell
    in yearn with this celestial seraph
    without closing my
    eyes / Orion kissed me that
    night and I've been avoiding
    the sun ever since.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks cindy! your words are definitely appreciated!

    one love,blak
     
  3. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooooooooo!

    now u know i love the univerSOUL love jones stuff....

    u just break my heart your work is so beautiful!!


    *kissing the stars*
     
  4. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blakverb

    I wonder if you really know how seriously talented you are
    The things you do with thought
    The action you take with verbs
    In the name of the noun
    Allow me to add-jective
    My own subjective opinion
    Of you
    And question you

    "Do you really know how talented you are??" ;)

    *gramm-****-good*
     
  5. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words please my ears,nice Blak
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I won't be

    redundant. You know how you expand my mind.

    Thank you.

    A
     
  7. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    tell me am i crazy
    i actually understood this
    man you deep
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man!!!!

    These Love Channels are mentally on :hot: like that!!!

    Probin' deep within ya deep mental Blak!!!

    Respect
    GQ
     
  9. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****!!!

    Ain't this about somethin'? The glare from the excellence of this piece is blinding, so... :shades:
    Truly, a :hot: (hot) piece, blak. I mean, for real. I'm on the lookout for you... :lovestruc
     
  10. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1 word.....

    Brilliant.....

    ~smiling at ya~

    8th!
     
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