Black Poetry : Channel Love @ 8:00 pm "Contented Configurations" (@8:30 "Orion's Osculation)

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I pose on her mental mantle
    statued in a contented configuration
    sweating from her blazing soul
    looking at my reflection in her third eye's Iris
    I wonder...
    what is she pondering?
    after wandering through boxes
    of unmet satisfaction
    left behind by figurines before me
    she decides to throw what remains
    to the fire /for warmth/ to make the
    most out of "at the time nothing"

    In the excitement of her Spring cleaning
    during the Winter she picks me up
    and in mid-pitch
    realizes
    I am not the prized possession of Rodin*
    but, "her" most prized obsession the
    thinking man
    whose visual vestibules shields her from
    contemptuous tears, the birthchildren
    of faux "I love yous"

    she places me back on the mantle
    and closes her eyes /so I/ can catch
    the lovedust of her thoughts.

    (c)2001 blakverb


    * Auguste Rodin, French sculptor
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    Oh really now?!?
    Deep-n-thought...!!

    Lovin' this piece
    :kiss:
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2,

    I see you took time off from creating masterpieces to bless my lil' ole piece with a reply I must say, thank ya Ndeed!

    one love,blak
     
  4. StarGoddess

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    u r killing me...
    not softly neither!


    *calming the death spasms*
     
  5. Amun-Ra

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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    blak~
    Again you've got my mind on overdrive!!;)
     
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    "the birthchildren of faux "I love yous"

    Nice *** line Blak as well as the entire piece!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ -
    thanks brother. as always your support is appreciated.

    Afri -
    hey sis, overcrive huh?

    Amun-Ra -
    thanks brother. I'll check out your column. Pronto!

    Stargoddess -
    thank you sis! Not softly? Cmon now.

    to my brothers and sisters, may peace bless all your days!

    one love, blak
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    VERB....

    maybe if i keep asking... one day i will be
    allowed inexhaustible access into that beautifully
    brilliant mind of yours... if only for... lets
    say... ummm... an hour?... okay!... 30 mins??...

    just let me know... :)

    you know this hea was amazing ryght?

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  10. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    repost repost
     
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