Quiet Poetry Lounge : Changing forms

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Nov 25, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "To the poet, to the philosopher, to the saint, all things are friendly and sacred, all events profitable, all days holy, all men divine." - Ralph Waldo Emerson


    -changing forms-
    Meeting fate by chance
    Answers left at the window sill,
    with which to be leapt.
    Collected as i Crept
    Bitter silence emitting heat
    between two individuals, neither here
    nor there, where the eyes can meet
    Distant conversations
    close connections
    ambient wires afire
    afros are froze
    bangs are banked
    by the sea shore
    time tickles the sand
    doing its' little crab dance
    the infinite shines as a pearl
    still in tide
    yet to be swept ashore
    discovered by man

    -Peace
    One love, One thug
    ...Antar
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word i hear ya
     
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    The rhythm of this piece seemed to accentuate the title. Flow on.
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for sharing this piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin this one back
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tyte drop, I war really feeling the flow... it got me flowing on a piece I've been working on for two weeks now. Thanks ;)
     
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