Black Haiku : Changes

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Apr 2, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The sun said now wait
    We've had enough rain
    I'll be running things this week

    BE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yet da rain fall down
    da sun break through rainbow bright
    now a week has pass
     
  3. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Then, the skies did glow with glee,
    Flora stretched and yawned,
    The land awakened.

    In other words, I like this Haiku a lot. ;^)
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pleasant Haiku
    I enjoyed read.

    Scribeallabout!


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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