Black Poetry : Change if You Want

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  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    changing on me,
    like a baby do.
    changing from uptight,
    from being you.
    changing cuz you think that,
    it will make you better.
    changing cuz you want folks to see,
    that your not dull colby but cheddar.
    see you can change your appearence,
    but never the inside.
    because the truth is hiding,
    but it's showing wide.
    what's really the matter,
    why did you change?
    because what you thought was in the mirror,
    was looking kind of strange.
    change you,
    but don't change me.
    because what i'm liking,
    is what i see.
    cuz no matter what you say,
    i'll change when it's time.
    you change your appearence,
    and i'll change my mind......
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow....
    like it..:angel1:
     
  3. unheard of

    unheard of New Member MEMBER

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    i like this

    i like this, it's honest and I can feel the emotion in it, that's what a good poem is, emotion on paper.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice flow well felt too
     
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    wow
    change when it is your time
    nice vibe on this here flow
    Peace
     
  6. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH-much love as alwayz

    mzblkangel-yo words mean a lot, preciate 'em

    Bluewater-thanx...........feeling the vibe is hard to do-----but i'm glad you feeling it. preciate yo reply.

    unheard of-thanx and welcome to the place where love is only the beginning.......
     
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