Black Poetry : Change gonna come..........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like to raise the stakes a little
    you can call me a gambler
    might even call me a rambler

    but let me tell ya sista and brotha im gonna speak on the real
    aint about to offer you no once in a lifetime kind of deal

    just some good ol fashion tell it like it is
    its amazing how this world is so full of corruption
    and how the power of greed is such a seduction

    prices of oil men are dying
    inflation flying

    and the heros so they say is hiding under there mother's skirt
    why cant you face the world and say i've done wrong
    no you cant do that because you have to appear strong

    tell the world were doing better
    and we all know who's making the cheddar

    but soon the reign of terror will soon come to and end
    and we all see who try to pretend he's our friend

    all the mess that been made is gonna be a job
    but who better to do it than a Woman

    are we ready for the Woman to take her rightfully place upon the throne
    we already take care of the bills, the kids, the men and the home
    why not let someone that qualifies take a stab at the mess that will be left behind

    ask yourself are you ready for the economy to be where its needs to be
    are you ready for healthcare to be for the poor and less fortunate
    are you ready to own a piece of America
    are you ready to be able to go and buy what you want and not have to put it on la-a-way
    are you ready to be look upon as finally a woman, man, or child
    are you ready to get the respect we all deserve

    all that will come when you vote for a Woman America
    let what God has blessed us with when man cant seem to get together
    let us focus on our land, and then the others can follow later
    get rid of the players
    thats been stealing from the cookie jar to long

    because im tired of being broke, disqusted, fustrated, and all worn out
    I just want to be finally able to say before I die
    Im sure am glad that i was able to give myself and my children the life we deserve
    because the world has seen the light and the light was a Woman
    which woman I dont know
    but I do know that

    Change is gonna come.............
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow... powerful piece... I feel somewhat responsible. lol... what encouraged you to write this?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed u took it to the beginning of a change that's coming !
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to defiantson..........

    to me writing this was just like i was on the pulpit preaching. my father is a preacher you can say i get it from my daddy. thanks papi for the love shown.:ilu:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to richy rich$$$$$$.....

    thanks for showing me love as well.
     
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    its been a long time coming but i know.....a change is gonna come

    whats going on queen i know it been a min but i can still see that your doing the thing better then before. thank you for writing this poem in a time where the real heroes (soldiers) are fighting hard while the reason for all this is sitting behind a nice desk safe. there is something wrong with this picture why we are the only ones that have a problem with this?

    Hope it comes soon
     
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    Nevar:
    This a really nice write. Some many things you state are so true.
    America is a hott mess right now. Who better to make the change.
    You did yo thang on this one. Flo on poetess
    Much Luv
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so proud of you right now. You did something increadible with this piece, you developing young skywalker.... LOL... Now keep writing...

    Mannie
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks blacksoul........

    thanks baby boy for showing me some love when are we going to do our collab. its on you holla at me.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man get at me, I am around you know I got some shows lined up and I am trying to come to the ATL... Its a work in progress....

    mannie
     
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