Black Poetry : CHANGE 2 REARRANGE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Many line been written
    words dat cannot change
    rethinking all dat has hittin
    for da contents i rearrange

    For da tymes i stood beside my friend
    to sho i care from deep within
    child play only brought on mental sin
    for in da shadows lurk tiny tin tin

    against da odds of my sorrow
    lession learn torment my heart borrow
    still one's greatness is my sweet flower
    set back in thoughts clashing by da hour

    Tyme now a precious jewel
    for i know not of all one's hearts clues
    I set sail collecting my love's gentle tools
    as i utter words dearing to rearrange da rules

    My soul still lay inside da bed of moments
    while my heart cry out in rapid plea
    deep inside i fine us a we to be complete
    if only one would come back to me !



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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a humbly sweet write...

    I felt every ounce of your sincerity...

    I especially liked, " I set sail, collecting my love's gentle tools"


    :spinstar: Beautiful and honorable.
     
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    awe see QQ at u .....always a sweet warm word from you that lift my spirit....Thankz a million sweetie pie.....my my my !!!!
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    most welcome!
     
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    As i humble smile @ cha ......
     
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    $Rich$

    You never disappoint when it comes to love's many expressions,
    your poetry always feels like a sweet mellow breeze....

    simply marvelous...



    epiphany:heart:
     
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    thank u ...when it comes from the heart sweet hush rings out
     
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    sometimes

    you put it out there so far in a good way
    and you're giving your all
    it's like it's never enough

    and you're asking where/how do you go wrong

    i mean that's what i felt from reading this
     
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    true dat so'ja ......when u put it out there everything and still go wrong make u wonder
    and seek how to rearrange it all ......sometime it's too late and sometime u can't change it Thankz for da visit inside a change pace.
     
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    Sometimes the answers we are seeking come in time...sometimes when we stop searching so hard, there lies the answer. Feeling this write.
     
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