Quiet Poetry Lounge : CHANCE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sierra, Jun 26, 2003.

  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I pray
    someday
    you'll realize
    who I am.

    I hope
    one day
    you'll see
    the worth
    of me.

    I need
    a space
    and place
    to show you
    what I know.

    Please don't
    leave me
    hanging
    on.

    Give me
    some of
    your time
    and a little
    room.

    All I need,
    is just one
    glance.

    And then
    maybe
    you'll see
    I was worth
    this chance.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed i see
    whom u be
    the warmth
    of what's to be
    dis chance is
    given
     
  3. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich,

    You have given me much hope! Thanks so much for writing!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    all you asked if to be given one chance ...i love it...nice flow...:) wonderful
     
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    You got it... and another, and another, and another, and

    You get the idea!
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Blue,

    You are so sweet!! Thanks so much for your continued kindness.

    Peace to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1Poet,

    Got it!!

    You are becoming my anchor, my friend.

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hope is part of the faith
    inside that is hope
    and chances is given ...
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Rich,

    As always, you speak the truth. You make everything clearer with your wonderful insight.

    I have hope and faith. I have to start believing in myself and keep striving. Then, hopefully, the chances will materialize.

    Thanks so much for always being there!!

    Are you becoming my guardian angel?

    Stay sweet, Rich!! :kiss:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    This was beautiful and touching Sierra, nice flow!
     
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