Black Poetry : Challenge

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 2, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jul 2, 2003
    Messages:
    4,912
    Likes Received:
    613
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    (RF) Technician
    Location:
    ( Alonewolf ) California.. by way of the LOU
    Ratings:
    +795
    Some things I sorted and put together.

    Always challenge a man.. he can't resist a challenge.

    A MAN .. a lover or sweet heart, a male human
    being is endowed with qualities such as :
    COURAGE...in a man is shown by...
    (Full command of one's faculties, feelings, and behavior).
    (Showing confidence which is based on a trust or reliance).
    A man is given ...Resolution, a ability to process
    and separate things, or himself from something.
    He is able to see them as constituent parts,
    as a separate component and as a whole.
    A man is able to give explanation, to a problem,
    or puzzle and come up with a solution.
    To show emotion is real strength.

    ===========
    Challenge Him!

    A Man is given..STRENGTH...
    ( having physical power, a toughness. A supportive
    staying power. Man has been given a concentration,
    unlike woman thats intense, vehement
    in emotion, passion, and conviction ).
    Every man has his own fervor.
    ( It's called fire.. heat.
    Lady's call it sex appeal, handsome)
    FORTITUDE... ( Man has a strength of mind that
    allows him to endure pain and adversity with courage).

    ===========
    Challenge Her!

    WOMAN...WISE...a woman is the glue and adhesive in a
    relationship. She holds the key. A man can't have a
    relationship with a woman. She has to accept or allow it.
    She is charged with holding the relationship together.
    Allowing or working with her mate to build and
    assemble a loving relationship or family.
    A woman has tenderness. A man needs this.
    A woman is refined... polite and has
    ELEGANCE..a refinement and grace in movement...
    (walks and stands in a sexy way ) a woman has inner
    beauty which will always over ride her outward appearance
    and manner. If her heart is dark and cold..it will
    be seen by those who have the sight.
    Her inner beauty some people can't explain they
    just want to be around her, and help her anyway they can.

    ===========

    Always Challenge!!

    This is because a woman has
    OPULENCE... Great Wealth.. this is how she can
    influence or inspire people.. She can make a man
    feel he can do anything if he can do it for her, or
    assist her in doing something.
    AFFLUENT... abundant resources of inner wealth.. an
    effect or quality of life that can flow into another.
    A wealth and beauty she can share.
    COPIOUS.. never ending source of love.
    A FULLNESS... more mature than man, totally qualified,
    accepted, and empowered with what a man really needs.
    A woman has depth and is complete.
    To you I give what I know is true, will you give what
    you have to me?


    (c) HODEE...
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    Canada
    Joined:
    Jan 28, 2001
    Messages:
    3,759
    Likes Received:
    673
    Gender:
    Male
    Location:
    the near north
    Ratings:
    +836
    GOD's greatest gift...

    behind every GOOD man...there is a woman who.......has depth and completeness...who challenges her man to succeed...to compete...to rise above the rest in the test of his greatness. your river flows abundantly, HODEE.

    WELCOME to the playground.
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2003
    Messages:
    10,784
    Likes Received:
    4,235
    Gender:
    Male
    Ratings:
    +4,472
    this is really tight....
    welcome to the land of poetic delight
    stay
    and drop more bombs
    peace
    khasm
     
  4. Sodwn2earth

    Sodwn2earth Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 27, 2005
    Messages:
    208
    Likes Received:
    3
    Occupation:
    Student
    Location:
    Central Valley, Ca
    Ratings:
    +3
    Really nice. I agree with all that you said. Very insightful. Your poem goes into more detail about the chracteristics of a man and woman then my poem. What they each posses. Like I said, very nice.
     
  5. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Feb 6, 2005
    Messages:
    877
    Likes Received:
    9
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    Mechanical Engineer
    Location:
    Educating the Diaspora
    Ratings:
    +9
    Alright Brother Hodee,

    Looks like you been holding back on us. This is a very good piece.
    Thanx for sharing..
     
  6. info-moetry

    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Dec 20, 2004
    Messages:
    10,724
    Likes Received:
    6,428
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    A+ technician
    Location:
    The rotten Apple
    Ratings:
    +6,486
    peace Hodee,

    - Very thought provoking,

    indeed there is always a woman in front of the man, it's just that man's arrogance is in the way!!!!!

    - beautiful scribe!!!!!!!

    peace
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Plenty of insight here, and eloquently put. Flow on brotha poet.
     
  8. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jul 16, 2004
    Messages:
    633
    Likes Received:
    4
    Ratings:
    +6
    Hodee, This is a lovely real poem.Substance in a woman or man come with age and wisdom.
     
Loading...