Quiet Poetry Lounge : chalice full of tears

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by uplift19, Mar 23, 2006.

  1. uplift19

    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OK, so this one's a little depressing, but I thought why not, it's the "quiet peaceful flow lounge" :)

    C H A L I C E F U L L O F T E A R S
    Whispers in the night striking memories adored
    a single falling tear, telling stories of hearts torn
    the essence of my being, and the longing of my soul
    painted with memories of you, and a story never told
    infinite wisdom with one touch, as I dance
    in the beam of your light
    forever I will be
    your moon
    in a
    connection
    that surpasses
    sight, the art of life
    unveiled
    my knight of fantasy
    facing the dawn
    bittersweet
    because in my dreams
    I'm the lady of eternity
    now love's a distant memory
    but when I close my eyes you're near
    all I have left is a wounded heart, and a chalice full of tears​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling this deep and in every tear is a new day ahead
    like how u draped this piece
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow this was deep poet full of emotions keep up the good writes.:welldone:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've never done a poem like this before, one that forms the shape of its topic, I really like it. Although the subject matter was sad, this was beautifully written. Thank goodness we always find a way to move on.
     
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    uplift19 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wrote this some time ago but it is one of my favorite poems because it turned something painful into something beautiful
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uplift, this was excellent, I see the cup of love runneth over:)

    :welldone: :roll:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uplift...that was/is a beautiful piece, I been there! I like the way it flowed, thanks for sharing a part of you.
     
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