Black Poetry : Chair Dancing

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  1. Onichika

    Onichika Active Member MEMBER

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    Chair Dancing

    Eyes meet instigating my chest to beat
    Whole body begins to heat
    Sirens going off sounding retreat,
    Fantasying about everyone’s favorite game,
    Previous attempt genuine but withered in vain,
    Straining to remove the stain I wear,
    Binding me with my own fear,
    The beauty of exchanges between us,
    Further endeavors will erase out first moments,
    Nothing to you,
    But hope to me,
    Praying fair tales ain’t baseless.
    Breathing life in belief to cure perpetual stasis,
    Hesitating to wake cause in daylight the dream may break,
    And I’ll stay forever as I am,
    Rather then touching, holding, embracing, chasing, lacing every part your body,
    Wanting me shattered and broken,
    Tattered and soaking in the sewage of my existence,
    Passing my insecurities with your lips,
    Holding me forever in the moment,
    Letting our momentum give birth to an infinite echo ecstasy,
    Or do my best too disregard just another fantasy​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwww!!!
    da heat and thought
    of ecstasy pass fantasy
    this was tyte................
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot, hot. hot , hot , hot:heart:
     
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    Hi Onichika
    This is a nice poem
    as I read on and absord your flow
    going much deeper, a dream of involvement
    and more romance just taking a chance.I enjoy your poem
    and I'm looking forward to reading more
    of your poetry
    Peace
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~ Immaculate

    ...your style is a
    ~ A breath of fresh poetic air

    Loved it...:toast:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a nice vibe
    I enjoyed this poetic verse

    Peace
    Angel
     
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