Black Poetry : chains of love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladygodiva, Dec 8, 2003.

  1. ladygodiva

    ladygodiva New Member MEMBER

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    oh how you have changed
    yet i still find my self chained
    ...chained to your scent
    ... to your smile
    ... to a broken heart
    and after a while these chains begin to weigh me down
    and though i loved you this love is causing me pain
    and all of my chains are causing me to drown
    drown in a river of regret
    ...in a sea of sorrow
    ...in a lake of loneliness
    knowing breaths taken yesterday, will sufficate me tomorrow
    because as tomorrow slowly unfolds
    I am deathly afraid of what the next day will hold
    my heart now racing
    because the future I face
    shows that my soul will chase
    a replica of you who will never replace
    and i'll be missing your caressin'
    and even though it had me stressin'
    i'll be missin your spurts of agression
    oh how you've changed
    and i'm still chained
    chained to you
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice maybe u wanted this in the poetry forum
    i will place it for u ...lovin ya work happy u are aboard the family
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this...
    felt the emotions as i read
    nice flow indeed
     
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