Black Poetry : Chad... I Can't Call It

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  1. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why have i thought about so much as of late
    why despite what happened i am not filled with hatred
    why i thought i was over you and over us
    the truth is i just ignored what i felt when i felt it
    despite all the inconsistencies and the lies and the betrayl
    i just want to hear you call me sweetheart or
    drop me a text just to say that i love you
    why am i even writing this to you
    thought about dropping it on your windshield
    leaving it in your mailbox or you inbox
    thought about calling you when i was in your city
    why you were on my mind all 259,200 seconds
    but alas i came to my senses
    you are the reason i changed my number
    i was too afraid you'd call and i'd answer
    you are the reason no other man has a chance
    why i don't give anybody the benefit of the doubt
    why i've become internally bitter, weary, and wary
    you are the reason i can't call it
    so tell me why i still love you
    **** chad i really can't call it.
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey sista softly:
    Feeln' you on this scribe.

    Much Luv
     
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    Versatile Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey

    I am definitely feeling this poem especially how it starts. i can actually relate.
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you..
    I had a chad that flew thru from a windy city..
    said sweet things in my ear..
    but the simple fear of lies and deception..
    when he lost phone cell phone connections..
    had more cell phone numbers in 6 months..
    than i had in all my life..
    those phone calls from the 219..
    just gave me strife.
    when the facts just didnt add up..
    and i knew i had enough..
    now theres no text messages..
    no 50 million calls when i cant get to the phone..
    but life is calm..
    im at peace..


    nice scribe!
     
  5. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Phew, this "CHAD" got y'all writing poetry about him, huh? Maybe I need me a "CHAD" in mee life... :lol:... Scribe on guys:spinstar:

    :couple:

    :picture:
     
  6. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love verse, spicy, poetic, 4ever... i wrote it a minute ago.. .and like poetic when i let go life became calm and i could actually let someone else read it...

    poetic... sis... i had one as well.. blew in from the coldest winter ever... he was in the 312... we may not be talking about the same person but he has the same spirit... half of it is my fault for ignoring things (stupid me) and assuming that most people operate from the same foundation--honesty... the crazy thing is he lives to be the center of 'your' (whoever your is) attention... you fight him, ignore him and he keeps coming.. but when you concede... the defeat comes swiftly and unjustly... but alas... life is calm now.. the air is fresh now... i can breathe.. ya know...
    all is i can say is... :wb: to the old me... he being who he be led me to me and to c my king... now... q gots her groove back...:dj: lol
     
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    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and yes.. the quiet after the storm out of nowhere..
    definately has its luxurious qualities..


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    look out now , i'm no CHAD but i can be yo ...u know
    this was on point u expressing here !
     
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    i call it being hot sista. im the only Blanche Devereau around here. just kidding love. how have you been doing my sista. I've missed you and Soblessed. can't keep up with you gals for nothing. has she had the baby yet. well sis enough of my ranting. hit me on the Im will ya.
     
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    IUCS, dope write..I can relate.
    PoeticM dope write too.
     
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