Black Poetry : Cerebral Orgasm

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kori, Nov 5, 2004.

  1. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOTE: This title is from a pen name of a fellow poet on another, I got the idea for the poem from a friend of mine though. Its supposed to be a spoken word, but I don't have that type of capabaility just yet.

    Ooooh baby, Can I lick your thoughts?
    Im enticed by your mind's ability to quench my thirst
    Your intellect be your erotic venom
    And I know you gon' let me get a sip of that mind juice!
    I want you
    I be entranced by your truth
    Your love got me feelin like an old soul trapped in the body of youth
    AHHHHHHHHH
    I inhale the flatulence of your aura
    Your masculine mind poots are so refreshing to my senses
    And I love the way you penetrate me...psychologically
    Delving into my psyche with your
    loooooooooonnnnnngggggggg...
    T H I C K....
    Diction...
    Carressing my emotions interior wit your orgasmic expertise
    Using your words on me like masturbation:
    Manually pleasuring my 6th sense
    just..........like.......that
    Oooooo weeeeeee!
    That's that **** yall
    How your being whispers sweet nothings to my heart
    Allowing me to witness your poetic nature rising
    Daaaayyyuuuumm.....Is it s'posed to look like that?
    Yesssssssssssssssssssss
    The wisdom poured forth by his heart constantly beckons my soul
    The voice of his soul yells out to me
    He called me...
    He called me
    .....
    And I came.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very hot desireable twist of bliss
    i love it .................................
     
  3. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OMG...! ! !
    Do you mind if i just keep this one close by lol
    This was so tyte..!
    I mean the way it flowed and how i could just
    feel your "cerebral arousal"..lol..was off the hook.
    so by all means,
    "KEEP EM COMIN"...1
     
  4. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich thanks for always peeping my work. I appreciate teh feed back.

    MzMelanie, thank you as well, Im glad you enjoyed.
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo this was deep right here........i saw the title and just to sight it. I went for a ride. I especially liked the loooonnngggg thick,...diction...deep play on words. :welldone:
     
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