Black Haiku : Celluloid Crush

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  1. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Electrical vibes
    Imagination runs wild
    Temptations derived…

    Almost can taste you
    So near and yet…Oh so far
    Making me feel weak

    Words alone can’t say
    Your eyes do something to me
    As if they can speak

    Feels like I’m falling…
    Enraptured under your spell
    A captive you’ve made

    So hard to resist
    The totality of you…
    Has me so unglued

    Satisfaction mine
    If only I could have you
    Til then…I’ll rewind


    ( …Extended Haiku inspired by our gorgeous Afrikan American movie/tv star bruthas…)

    ~ Akilah July 2005 ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Every motion made
    my heart fludz into beauty
    her silent sway

    mesmerize my eyes
    perfectional glist within
    i'm seeing through starz

    strong rapture calling
    in the depth of my soulful
    body i know is

    the glasses of love
    we toast yearly from afar
    manifesting sweet

    painted picture now
    only goodness cover me
    yet touching my heart

    unto the beautiful African American sistas of showcase we see.
     
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    fabulous as always...*applause*
     
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    thank u and it was u that brought forth it so Thank u !!!
    i love when u flow like dat have me in aweee! from it ....
     
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    Sir Richest

    This coming from the Poet Master...
    You are truly too kind :kiss1:
     
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    da kisses of rush
    crush the myth to love within
    a Queen is treasure

    the loyality of
    heart send wave at thy soul on
    honor of beauty

    these are celluloid
    crushies by deed faithfully
    mesmerized in her

    Thank u sista ur one of a kind to cherish......
     
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