Black Poetry : celebrating you...

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  1. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was asked if I could love
    you forever for it’s such a
    long time and yet what I see
    is a blink in my father’s eye;

    I love you unlike no other
    I adore you with the beating
    of my heart and everyday I
    commit to celebrating you;

    I seek to walk with you
    when the seasons greet
    and hold you when the
    dusk meets the dawn;

    I want to sing when the
    Seed is planted and rejoice
    when the harvest sees the
    first light of a new day;

    I want to carry you through
    the sands of life covering your
    smile in a sea of silk and lace to
    place within the strength of me;

    I love to love the essences of you
    Holding you close to my heart and
    Lifting you high above the world so
    that you touch the hem of His garment;

    I want to walk with you singing the
    Songs of Solomon and dance with
    you like David who wrote the words
    of virtue describing the wonder of you;

    you are the 8th wonder of the world
    for in all that GOD had done He has
    blessed me with the chance to experience
    a gift many men seek but few find;

    I celebrate you as Valentine’s day becomes
    A lifestyle and as Christmas turns into
    A daily walk as long as I can hold you close
    To the innermost places of my heart;

    I celebrate you not like the party of your birth
    But the festival of our rebirth, a reunion of one
    I sought so long ago who has now returned to
    Be a part of me in times of forever and true;

    I love you and that will never changed
    Unlike the seasons, unlike time but know
    That as we see fall move away for winter to
    Return it is I who will keep you safe and warm;

    I celebrate you today, tomorrow , and forever
    60 years and more….i love you
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving the way that you love me..........

    i am yet still amazed....
    unable to comprehend...
    your heights..

    i am learning
    how to bathe in these showers
    you rain on me.
    this type of celebration is so new...
    all i can say is..
    thankyou

    8th!
     
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    Wow dnommo!

    beautifully written!!!

    I'm breathtaken!
     
  4. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my dear
    i want for you to
    walk with cover of
    umbrella for the love
    showers upon you are
    a gift from GOD who
    today has opened the
    gates of heaven to
    pour me out...
    you

    143 boo
     
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    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i want to dance
    nakedly
    in the streets with this love
    showering me
    fully
    confidently
    assuredly
    as the love he has made in me...

    ~putting on my dance shoes~
     
  6. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    okay you have brought a smile to my face...

    as David danced in the streets
    i see you celebrating the gift
    that GOD has placed before us
    what's in store for us the true
    walk of life or the true love of
    GOD...i seek happiness in the know
    that my life shall no longer be
    a walk for one....

    you got mail my love...
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    afri,
    thank you for the read. imma just expressing the gift GOD has blessed me with...
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sing those Songs of Solomon brother!!! there is nothing like finding that one who fills your heart with what it needs to feel. this scribe is an Ode to the most beautiful thing God has given to man/woman and that is the feeling of love.

    "10 plus infinity"

    one love,blak
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks blak,

    man she got me climbing new walls of love... my scribes speaks of it. hey let's do that colab man...
     
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    D.....

    Immaculate!

    Peace&Love...
    SunShyne~
     
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