Black Poetry : Cavemen And Art

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cavemen And Art

    This is a brave blend but cavemen was the first thugs
    Had the worse clubs couldn’t dance with romance no love
    Or chance to advance not energetic but aesthetic to art
    Their emotions and sensations were strong like a metal band
    And real wet like oceans of condensation that settles on land
    Cavemen were gorilla in appeared thrill to eye clearance man
    His dome rage in the Stone Age battling reptiles and saddling
    Styles primitive, he drew first picture thirst for scripture straddling
    Dinosaurs cavemen were stunning individuals had hunting ritual
    Before forming a search party in hope magic touch body spiritual
    Be able to throw sharp spears kill foe and deer murder is habitual
    After a religious ceremony rigorous and stony now all original
    In a prescribed code of behavior, tribe mode to hunt major wild game
    Ruled strife but was unschooled on life but their art had mild fame
    Art is sculptures of our dark cultures it’s the mystery
    Of our history it is music so don’t abuse it with blistery
    Comments, it’s an exhibit on paper explicit of nature
    In paint that doesn’t taint and can’t be forgotten it’s nomenclature
    On canvas, it appeals to the imagination feel the vibration
    As it shatters your thoughts into fragmentation like grenade detonation
     
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    you are indeed an explorer poet :)
    taking it back in time
    feeling the vibration
    of this tyte piece
    you always throw in a flow
    that adds a smile to my face :)
    nice one
    loving this
    Peace
     
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    UR RHYME SCHEME IS UNBELIEVABLE!!

    OMG THIS IS JUST TOO [email protected] TYTE! KEEP EM COMIN, FA SHO!
     
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    As and artist...I must say that your work here is

    "INCREDIBLE".....

    I absolutely love this piece...
    Keep it flowin Madd...this was smooth!
     
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    madd...drop
    keepin them comin..
    i enjoy the read..:angel1:
     
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    MADD u droppin mad skillz bruh feel da scribe
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REALLY appreciate it

    thanks to all those who read and special thanks to those that replied