Quiet Poetry Lounge : Cause of Death: Hemorrhage Of the Heart

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  1. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    It was never his intent to kill her
    He said he wasn't aware of her heart's susceptibility
    And she, weakened, had no perceptibility
    Of the quick, deep cuts and stabs he made
    As with every withdrawal, he sharpened his blade
    For the next attack
    Even in his fevered frenzy
    He had no idea
    That he'd even drawn blood
    For, it was inside that the flood
    Coursed through her core
    And as each corpuscle tore
    She bled from the inside, out
    Drowning in her own pain and self-doubt
    Hurt, misery, and misplaced trust
    (Hacked to pieces)
    By his own self-hate and twisted lust
    All because she tried to heal him
    But he was angered
    That her inner light made his more DIM
    And, for that, she had to pay
    Always pushing her away
    While pulling her to stay

    But, it was never his intent to kill her.
     
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    killing me softly and slowly as my heart wilt
    this was awesome indeed well displayed poeticly
    dat captured da minds of readers as it was intent
     
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    but that she would stay

    ...and play
    russian roulette
    with her every desire
    ...that the fire that burns within
    might heal the gushing wounds that
    midnight and noon finds
    freeflowing in its need to give
    ...to live beyond her desire
    twice fired
    still
    she returns
    for the blood that churns
    within her soul
    i'm told
    is that blood that nurishes his fire
    for life is that liar
    that feeds to keep her strong
    but love doesn't last long
    it just last strong
    and that strength goes
    on and on
    'til that pinch becomes a crack
    and that crack, an open well
    'til every blood cell departs
    THUS
    hemorrhage of the heart
     
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    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    So, instead....


    She walked away.







    Thanx for the flowback, Baller! :toast:
     
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