Black Poetry : Cause and Effect

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Mar 20, 2004.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    becomes sad at times
    how other can
    effect
    how you think

    how
    you
    feel
    about
    yourself

    the cause
    just mess up
    a good vibe

    the effect
    a lost

    something
    harmless
    as a tease
    can shy
    a person
    away

    feeling bend

    mistrust
    comes
    in the play

    so sad
    it hurts
    how that
    effect
    cause
    a end

    what happen
    to
    sensitivity

    plain
    old fashion
    respect

    i don't see
    the joke
    or find
    it funny

    a joke
    is to bring
    comfort
    not
    down grade
    another

    a joke
    gone to far

    what was said

    is just
    mean


    I am bend

    so so sad
    causes and
    effects of the actions.
    cause and effect
    cost a friendship

    now what
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pondering this...You know what they say about that one bad apple, well, we don't have to let it spoil the whole bunch. You're right, some things are just not funny. Liked the real feel to this flow, keep the flow going Blue.
     
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    Hmmm

    Cause and effect....Hmmmm..can surely leave a mind in a mentally wreck.
    Nice drop sister Blue :heart:
     
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    i feel you on this
    it can destory ones pride
    for sure all with words
    words are powerful
    strong in the meanings
    and can be harsh...
    and words alone
    can kill a person inside
    love your flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you sisters for your understanding and love:heart:
     
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    The scriptures say
    "A brother offended is harder to be won than
    a strong city; and their contentions are like
    the bars of a castle"- Proverbs 18:19

    Sometimes we make the mistake of offending others
    unknowingly. Sometimes others don't fully understand how sensitive we are.
    I used to be the one to make fun of people, but not so much anymore.
    You never know the impact of the negative things you say and hear.

    Now with that said:


    this was da :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb: :bomb:

    Very nice flowing sis. Felt the message!
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you dear brother for your love, and feeling this:heart:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhhhhhh.....I'm a brotha :argue: :nono: :censored:

    lol it's all good :peace:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love :)to you my warrior:heart:
     
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    We all know, or show know that..."once something is spoken...it CANNOT be recalled :nono: .
    A very wise person once told me, when you get married always remember this: "MOUTH DON'T CARE WHAT IT SAY" ...and I find that to be so true. The "CAUSE is never greater than the "EFFECT"
    just my opinion...
     
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