Quiet Poetry Lounge : Caught

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UbZoRbShUn, Jun 25, 2001.

  1. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today I got
    Caught in the rain
    Cool summa
    Showers washed the day
    Away
    Felt good pelting
    My face
    My neck
    My arms
    Briefcase was soaking
    I didn't care
    Jumped in puddles
    On the sidewalk
    No one looked my
    Way
    Had they
    They would have
    Seen the warm
    Tears streaming
    Down my face

    © UbZoRbShUn 2001
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    YESSSSSSS!!!

    SINGING IN DA RAIN
    SING~~~~ING IN DA RIAN
    WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY
    IN DA RAIN OF SPLASH
    AS THE WARM FLOW OF WET TEARS RUN:)
     
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    wanna go outside...in da rain

    warm tears of joy
    tears of pain
    a smile
    a frown
    here we go again
    when a piece of my peace
    runs away from me
    and dark clouds of anger
    are all i can see
    i sit and i meditate
    on the importance of life
    and GOD's love wash over me
    relieving me of strife

    then, i cry
    warm tears of joy

    I SEE THE CLOUDS COMING NOW.
    MAY I PLAY IN THE RAIN WITH YOU?:)

    WELCOME back my QUEEN of UbZoRbShUn
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh it's good to be home

    if only for a brief moment. Brothas thank you thank you thank you. When I got caught in the rain I didn't try to make a dash for ma house. I just held ma head up high and let the cool waters soothe my spirit. I danced the dance of soliloquy all the way to ma front door and I smiled as the sun broke through.



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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    UbZo

    you deep
    nice piece
    in the summer heat
    made not the day but the week

    Peace
    my well-respected artist
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja

    preciate you preciatin' ma piece of peace. Man that rain felt so good to me. Made a sista slow down and check herself.


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  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    after you and maybe we can swop tales and float paper boats. How you be sis????


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    hopscotchin' in the puddles huh??
    this piece was warm.

    jh.
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my shoes were soaked and I didn't even care.
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shun!

    I dig this one hea... I had a simi-similar concept cross me recently though it went unwritten. maybe I will have to work on dat...

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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