Black Poetry : Caught in A Foxhole

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Caught in A Foxhole

    Convert rhymes to acid and alert minds with drastic script
    a jerk ascinine with a plastic verse should rehearse your HIP-
    HOP, just a misled fake with a headache suffer continuous
    Pains while I drop tremendous flames stuff just stupendous
    Became a strange soldier after a change over of shifts
    Slim and mean with an M16 ready to shoot and uplift
    The enemy in my vicinity wants to attack and try stiff
    Arm me I drink from my canteen with plan extreme
    Guard duty is devastation and pure this fox hole steam
    With vegetation and manure smell like compost most
    Of the time, acts of precision backs my mission close
    To losing my mind like cruising with a nine in the streets
    This a fire fight not a drive by must survive not die the heat
    Is on and my heart beat strong somebody out there no doubt
    At the mess hall been fed, must use my infra red enemy route
    Is slick see plenty of sky put my weapon on semi and waited
    Anticipated a sneek attack these freaks whack hell we created
    These jungles we be rated as humble if not disturbed we related
    To the wild animals our style is to handle biz tactics not debated
    We live on facts after bivoac have to give back to our platoon
    Now in the boone docks soon to drop ammo like Daniel Boone
    Wanna be a pioneer not dying here can’t be relying on fear
    Wanna write renown script lock and loaded 18 round clip here
    To fight, met a cute tramp at boot camp lips sweet I ain’t lying
    Got a parachute craving to be flying and Saving Private Ryan
     
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    In da mist of battle , da foxhole can be danger zone when u get blown
    by da tramp uncover ..........I like da style of this joint!
     
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    Diggin the word play in this piece rhymebad.
     
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    foxhole got'em all caught up so i had to bring this one back out !!!
     
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    THANKS EVERYBODY FOR THE PROPS ON THIS ONE FOR REAL
     
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