Black Poetry : Caught By Surprise

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Natasha, May 5, 2002.

  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He caught me by surprise
    I wasn’t looking for him
    I don’t even think I wanted him
    At first
    Then I heard his voice
    His words flowed over me
    Through me
    Under me
    Bounded over the wall I just finished building
    Around my soul
    And then I looked into his eyes
    And I melted
    Like warm, thick butterscotch
    And to make matters worse
    His lips found mine
    In a gentle embrace
    Our tongues dueled for dominance
    Our lips fit
    Like that 1001 shaped picture puzzle piece
    In a box of 1000 that’s left over
    And our souls found comfort in the warmth of passion
    Instant heat
    Instant attraction
    Instant …….
    He caught me by surprise
    Snuck up on my blind side
    His blunt honesty
    His direct approach
    His devil may care attitude
    Called to my stifled soul
    Like a trumpet
    He caught me by surprise
    And made me lay all my doubts and inhibitions aside
    He caught my by surprise
    I wasn’t looking for him
    But he was looking for me
    And the surprise of it all
    Here I am …with him
    Cause he caught me
    By
    Surprise
     
  2. charleshandy

    charleshandy Active Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice piece of work
    behold little one you have
    maded out of the storm
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOH Girl!

    Sounds like Spring has Sprung and love has begun...
    Go on with ya bad self this one was hot but tasteful
    warm and sensuous and so delightful!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE AND YA LOVE!:heart:
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like dis here fella is making all the right moves, I would simply like to congratulate him for his good taste
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lets just say

    Spring is here : Summer is sure to follow And al is well in the Diva's house ! :heart:
     
  6. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like suprises!!!:D

    I like the flow too!!!
     
  7. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pleasantly...

    I'm sure. Don't fight it-enjoy it for all it's worth!!!

    just lovely!
     
  8. Watcher

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    That's why I watch.....I'm never caught by surprise.........
     
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