Black Poetry : Catharsis

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  1. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    months of tension
    weeks of fear
    days of loneliness
    braided into a whip
    that lashed at my soul
    finally escaped
    riding the crest of a scream
    as his lips cleansed me


    c. 2003 Brandi N. Rainey
    All rights reserved
     
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    Looks like you got what you were waiting for and then some...nice drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribe very poetic
     
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    very nice drop indeed
    says alot... :angel1:
     
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    either my mind is in the gutter or l need another perspective on this piece...
    either way, it was mos definitely short and sweet!

    tyte!
    jh.
     
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    I sho did! ;) Thanks for the read.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Thanks much. I appreciate your words.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving that angel smiley. It's so appropriate. ;) Thanks for the read.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    this was wonderful
    deep in the mental
    on this poet
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  10. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another perspective? I don't think you need it. ;) Thanks for the dirty-minded insight.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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