Black Poetry : Catchin' a Case of You

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need a lil sumthin' for what ails
    me when I'm

    feelin' under the weather and
    a tad bit blue

    Tylenol, Excedrin, nor Advil certainly
    won't do…

    I need that special elixir that's
    made for those times when I've

    caught a real bad case of you

    Ya send shivers up and down my
    spine till I'm almost

    flat ____________________
    lined

    Cheezin' while wheezin' ya name
    in vain; full of serious love pain

    Ain't
    a
    damned
    thang
    changed

    Ill to the gills; coughin' like whoa
    Sometimes I'd fake death like a
    fiend from

    OD'ing on ya and off ya fa 'sho!

    Nyquil, Robitussin, or Thera-Flu

    Won't help this brotha that's

    caught a hella bad case of you

    Sick as a dog; worshipping the
    porcelain god

    Callin' Earl while I hurl

    Thinkin' wicked thoughts
    of your bod

    Sweatin' like a slave in the heat
    of the night; chest all tight

    Catch the vapors from the Vicks
    Rub that love salve on thick

    I think I know just what will do
    the trick

    Smother me; cover me

    Get me hot
    Caress my spot

    If that don't do it
    I don't know what can

    Perhaps my own hands???

    Nah, forget that one man!!!

    Here's the prescription
    to my
    addiction

    of lovely, sweet you

    All it takes is a hit of that herb

    Echinacea

    And just a little bit of ya juices

    So I'd need to taste ya

    After that it's all good

    No more hurt, aches, or
    shakes

    Just an everyday dose of you

    Now that's some nasty medicine
    I like to take!

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    hahaha... :lol:

    it's like dat?? well... ****!! :D

    i always knew you were sick!
    at least now i know what ails ya!
    this was alla dat & den some!

    :heart:
    BlakGurl~
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound like u

    got it bad too.....GQ i be bout to bring u
    mis.med to cure yo butt.......coz u got it bad!:lol:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    Charming piece. :)


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    GQ

    hella funny peace!!!

    lmao @ Shery's reply!!!!!!!!

    it's all :heart:
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep,

    This was kinda funny now that I think about it!!!

    Thanks for looking in at it ya'll!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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