Black Poetry : Catch Me

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm here again.
    Just as I thought I'd be.
    I tried to fight it but the pull was too strong.
    I'm so helpless,
    there is no turning back.
    I swim and push forward because I have no option.
    In my head I hear words.
    In my heart I feel the beat.
    The rythm that's so invinting.
    I don't know if I wanted this or not.
    I don't know if I could've changed it if I tried.
    I only know that I'm here
    waiting for you to catch me.
    ©
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Can't help but try
    the way you run and fly
    catching you is my goal
    if i could, then i'll hold
    I'll try but u seem to get away
    so here i am again back today
    I see u !
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh...

    a cat and mouse game. here kitty...kitty. i got some milk for ya.:)

    words are what we do. keep doing you.

    the river floweth.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    @ $$R$$
    When you catch me Hold on tight
    Only with your love will I take
    flight and do the dance
    that birds only envy.
    And I will try to stay in your arms forever and a Day.

    @ Baller.
    Thanks Luv for the feedback.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    With leap and bound
    i'll reach wit lovin sound
    to hold on tight
    wit all my might
    to caress u day & night
    when i catch you .......
     
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    wow I definitely can catch the vibe of this. I have been there before. Great write.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks asimplepoet.
     
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