Black Poetry : Cast Away

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    her beauty was like nights glist
    and day shine
    her heart was warm and gentle
    lovin kind in whole
    her body dance in the stillo of rapture
    she be wit smiles of grace
    placed in a star above

    she speak wit great wisdom
    feeding knowledge free
    her flowz capture u wit a grasp
    she was the galla of poetry

    poetic motions weep as she let
    go her love in waves of passion
    inside every word

    now in a romantic bliss
    all i do is kiss the skies
    and embrace the whole
    picture of she and her beauty
    and slowly i
    cast it away in my mind
    holding firmly tyght
    whispering thankz as i fade:heart:
     
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    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Visions..

    I see the visions you created with the poetic words that describe
    The woman of every man's desire, the sister that can make a wet log spark a raging fire...yeah yeah Im feeling this!
     
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    after, what, two years...

    you're still amazing me, $$RICH$$. loved the tender sweetness of this.

    THANKS FOR FLOW'N.
     
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    big Thankz

    tbone.....glad u felt my flow within vision

    Baller..... man i tune in and zap dis one out

    Thankz bruthas....:toast:
     
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    $RICH$

    WOW! I am lovin' this heah! You got my head :spin: in' with this one. Very good :wink:

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    coco

    my heart speaketh in tongue !:heart: :)
     
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    cindy

    big smiles i hope ya right and she hear wit
    keen ear and warm heart ......thankz:heart:
     
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    $RICH$

    You have outdone yourself here.....
    Only the heart of a gentle, loving man
    can bring words that touch so
    sweetly and so deep........this is
    truly a masterpiece..... :toast:


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Epiphany

    slowly as my heart is cast upon her soul
    away our love will flow .........thank u so much
    a million tymes my Queeneth!:heart: :kiss: :heart:


    heart of gold ))))))):D
     
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    casting awayz like a lost child in da mid night
    yet the day seem bright and short....inside her love :toast:
     
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