Black Poetry : Cast Away

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside deep lay an spirit
    a spirit of love
    a love untold
    unfold tenderness
    as tyme cross path
    with the journey
    on dis journey was hope
    da hope of foreverness

    da doors are closing up
    the inner power fade
    the outter streight weaken
    soon will be no more
    tyme has come to be
    may self lay in da history
    now
    a lonely cast away...................
     
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    Tyte scribe poet....its all good...cast aways are full of coulda shoulda woulda...
     
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    inner TRUTHS and STRENGTHS and SELF will always shine through in the end. let us~cast away~all doubts...and relish the surety of knowledge.

    let the river flow.
     
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    Emprezz is...

    Out at sea looking for all cast aways!
    As a former cast away I now own the boat I was cast away from...

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    Cast away but not forgotten!

    Thanks Rich:kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awe thankz family ...........seeing da way with y'all help !
     
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    I feel like a cast away right now...out in the open sea..with the waves getting ready to swallow me...nice flow to this Rich.
     
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    Hmmm, this was emotive...speaking of closure and the end of once known love.... or rather cast away love, feeling this flow!
     
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    Rico man u know how it is when we get deep out their
    and then at once cast away.......thankz

    angelic ........yes u on point da lost love is cast away
    this can take a reader in two direction both ways is it
    your words hit home thankz
     
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    under da moving cloud i stand
     
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    u know what....
    i'm really lovin' this,$$RICH$$
    yr piece is real nice
     
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