Quiet Poetry Lounge : Cascading Moments...sonnet # 22

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    Cascading moments
    In the sun upon the river of love
    You took me there
    Now it’s no return
    As you gave my first line
    And touch my soul
    Cascading love rain falls
    So sweet as a flower scent
    You took me there…
    In a dream
    In a fairytale
    Upon reality
    You touch my hopes
    Invaded my desires…..
    You’re the sensation going down my spine
    Paining in my heart
    As love tears run
    Cascading moments of two become one
    Upon the loves moon
    You took me there…
     
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    very nice sonnet wit depth & passion
     
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    thanks for the love
     
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    This is so graceful and gentle, my sister. Great work.
     
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    thanks gempis
     
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    sometime cascading from da heart of love brings sweet passion
    of vision and warmth that make us see and hope and feel this
    was awesome as i read again and again !
     
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    thank you rich for letting me know you still enjoy the sonnet
    much love to you...Peace
    Angel
     
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