Black Poetry : Carry On

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Apr 12, 2009.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Carry On

    Got drastic quotes that stretch like an elastic rope fantastic
    Hope to become the best rapper, some rhymes belong in caskets
    My name perk like the frameworks of hot coffee can spot
    A softy a mile away keep my style on display and rhyme a lot
    Stress for peace and still a guest at feasts no false personality
    Bring boss hospitality but a fight messes up the night fatality
    Sad if guns are drawn you couldn’t find a prouder player
    My outer layer is like the earth’s crust I’m a brick layer
    Good behavior of a love troop from a major blood group
    Flow great, donate to Redcross, head is boss and play hoop
    Stuff make pigeons smoke so millions of folk across America
    Have false character like a yard braced with grass like Erica
    Badoo we all strong better call Tyrone we all in true doubt
    Throughout the world no hot pockets low stock market onroute
    For crashing and smashing our economy, like a sail boat
    Economic prevail afloat out of fear I’m eager to hear quotes
    Be nice to have a device for arithmetic calculation just to add
    And subtract now there’s a mad thug attack in my brain it sad
    Like a migraine headache, flow in stride and provide effective
    Leadership being a protective reader of script rhymes are collective
    Have to buy some property just to overcome povety now my focals
    Storming on global warming, alarming meltdown like the Chernobyl
    Disaster,
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Got drastic quotes that stretch like an elastic rope fantastic
    Hope to become the best rapper, some rhymes belong in caskets
    My name perk like the frameworks of hot coffee can spot
    A softy a mile away keep my style on display and rhyme a lot


    I love this part it was hot and hit da head str8 on wit a pop !!

    this joint was phat brother Rhymebad i see ya bustin quotes
    like hip hop notes with fire and smoke to lay out da joke from
    da whip you just wrote ......flow on bruh !


     
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    One line just flowed effortlessly into the next, like it just dripped onto the page rhymebad.
     
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