Black Poetry : Carry a plan like a military command it’s an about face

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MADDRAPPER, Jul 15, 2004.

  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Carry a plan like a military command it’s an about face
    Without grace picked up strange ammunition out in space
    Since the change of position took place now got ammo
    On route like Rambo and colonel Trout the worse thug to
    Draw first blood disperse love on microphones and slew
    Got harmony like an army, reveal forts and appeal to courts
    On defense spending, dense ending whys go fast and blow cash in support
    Of a Foreign policy, need quality? These republican cats
    Got the democrats in limo’s with gatts wearing gangster hats
    Toting baseball bats Where them pranksters at?
    Look the beast and I fighting over this piece of writing, feast
    While biting beef. Plate full of rice got hate trapped in a vice tensions increase
    Desire lace from a higher place look to the blue sky with
    A true cry scoping and hoping for an angel’s flying kiss a gift
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think it's safe to say, you got it going on...nice piece.
    try writing a "love poem"...let me see what you're working with.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was a rim rocker tyte scribe MADD
     
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    A comedy of errors but the innocent pay the price with their lives, while the policy makers sit back and watch. Keep the flows rolling.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana, watzinaname and $$RICH$$ thanks for the props for real yall
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You said it all right there, brothah. This is mad tight.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah GEMPIS thnaks for the love dawg
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GEMPIS YOU A SISTER SO THANKS FOR THE LOVE GIRL FOR REAL
     
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