Black Poetry : Carried away!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oops I got carried away, when I said that I loved you the other day...what I really meant to say is that I adore you and can't live without you and that every day I am with you makes my life seem like a dream...Do you know what I mean?

    See I get carried away when I lie in your arms all day, when you call in sick and call me and say do you wanna have a play day?
    The way you smile when I say something remotely clever...and when I start to ask you if it's ever been like this with any one else and you simply say "NEVER"!

    Man I get carried away when you put your foot down and tell me that I am not going to work all night and then all day! And you make me get my rest and you rub my feet until I snore and I wake up and you are still there!!!

    You make me sing and dance in the kitchen when you tell me I am a vision...a vision of what I say as I wipe the sweat away...you make me wanna slave over that hot stove and win my way to your heart through your stomach...and you laugh and say Baby you already got me...You don't have to work so hard...

    I get carried away, when I plan our wedding day, cause you are my King and I want you to have everything and nothing is too good for us...we went from walking to riding the bus from there to the grandest of rides and all the time you were right by my side....And soon I will be your bride!

    Dayum I get carried away...when I bless the sister's out when they say..."There ain't no good men!" and I say rather smugly to bad my man is not a twin! You make me glad I'm a woman when I look in your eyes, so warm and so tenderly when you are rubbing my thighs.

    Whewwwwwwwwwwww! I get carried away when I know I can see you every day. Long time coming and it's finally here, we'll spend Thanksgiving and Christmas and then the New Year...together. And sometimes we take long walks in any kind of weather...it couldn't get any better...

    Carried away, nothing more to say cause with that last kiss you carried my voice and my breath away...so instead I will just think about you and get
    Carried
    Away!

    BJS (C) 2003
     
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    Just the thought of love...helll this POEM took MY breath away!!!!!
     
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    Oh so tyte!!
     
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    Indeed. I'm carried away with joy reading this one. This is soooo nice....I mean hallmark nice....hell better than hallmark
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwww! Y'all are to sweet!

    You know what they say about spring time being for lover's, well spring has sprung and so have I...LOL
    Thanks guys for sticking with me while I was down sick and being the first ones to make me feel at home again....Much love and respect to my sista's !

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    all i can say is sweeeeeeeetttttttt msluciousb
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for reading always!

    Glad somebody got to read it before it got lost in the crowd!
    Sending some love vibes out to the lover in all of us!

    Blessings On Ya House!
    Thanks Justbnme! (and I love Pooh Bear):D
     
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    Hi, :)

    This one captivated me! It is wonderful. :toast:
     
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    "CARRIED AWAY" carried the day!!!
     
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    u got carried away,
    with some1 so sweet.
    your wedding day approaches,
    as he will sweep u off your feet.
    much love is here,
    and i hope your life is lived the way it should.
    and ain't all men bad,
    i'm glad u found one that was good.........(love that piece)
     
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