Black Poetry : Carribean Liberties

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  1. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whose that island girl?
    Blossoming, before me
    No longer smuggled under the blankets and the weight of He
    Feeling sexy satisfied and freeeeeeeee
    Free to be the thirst quenching enchantress that is me
    Bold, Regal, and Mesmerizing
    Ready to swim butt naked in the glittery golden seas
    Of a Caribbean love voyage, starring yours truly
    Me


    The sexiest captain you’ll eva meet
    Slim in the waist with nice legs
    What a treat
    Tearing up the concrete,
    with stilleto’s of knowledge
    Click-clacking down a wiser street
    My internal sex appeal can not be beat
    So pull up a chair daddy, here have a seat
    While I liberate myself you will surely feel this heat
    You like when I get sensually free!
    Forget all inhibitions, fears and worries
    And shake my body like the swaying of palm trees
    Back and forth, in graceful formality
    You be beating ya bongo’s to a different sound
    And different beat


    I dance on the sands, on the Carribean lands
    My spirit comes alive with every stroke of ya hand
    With every spoonful of your words, with every taste of Your salt
    We Caribbean glazzin
    And it aint nobodies fault
    Lucky for you
    You caught me while I was gaining back liberty
    Letting my hair down
    So your received presents from me
    Mangoes, papayas, and soft banana trees
    Gifts of insatiable, island shaking
    Exstacy
    Rockin tha boat till the waters come over me
    Milky waters of coconout and henny

    So No need to rescue me….
    I’m feeling liberated, sexy, and sensually free



    And that’s very fortunate for you daddy, lol.
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mornin' Sweet apple pie...

    You have truly penned an image. g'on get your:bellydance:on!

    Diggin' the flow!

    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
  3. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    U betta go girl!!!
    Making me jealous of warmth.
    It's 35 degrees in Detroit.
     
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    That laid back freedom of the islands was captured here, agreeing with coco, those images you penned were quite striking.
     
  5. Harry Hyman

    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SweetApplePie - Is that the trembling sensuality of a palm tree's pulsing sway that I'm feeling ? Do I hear the emissions of heated feline ferocity fueled by coconuts and milky mango magnetism? Is that the splish splash of liquid carribean heat at body temperature collision drenching me ? SweetApplePie is that you ? If so, please raise your hand. Oh Yes! Now I can see you. Looks like you're having a great time. I can tell by the Carribean Liberties you've poetically taken or are about to take. All I can say is I'm proud of you and keep up the good work. Namyh

    P.S. - I'll just be content with my inflatable lawn pool from K-Mart. It's got those pink bongos printed on the side laying on a sandy beach.LOL LOL LOL
     
  6. sweet apple*pie

    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Harry....oh you are so funny! Feelin like a tropical breeze Harry....yes I am.....and you are so sweet!!

    Thanks for the feedback everyone....



    :SuN011:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    What u say !!! where tis
    island be
    shakin like a plam tree
    wooooweeee
    applepie my my my !!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt the warm waves of the ocean, reading this...the calmness of the waves, great piece poet
     
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    very exotic flo on my sista!​
     
  10. epiphany

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    I'm with nevar...exotic indeed! Sister, Sweet Apple Pie.
    Living life to the fullest and happy, instead of just existing....is the best remedy.



    epiphany:heart:
     
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