Black Poetry : Carnal Battle

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Aug 27, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I paint the picture,
    Initially birthed in my mind,
    Time after time,
    When I get that feeling of solitude,
    And that I’m tired of being alone.
    I have every detail figured out,
    To the very bone.
    Tall, built, attractive,
    I can see his physique,
    Skin like honey,
    And I find it funny,
    How I can already taste it,
    It’s sweet.
    His words a complete,
    Emulation, imitation
    The very subject,
    And source of my,
    Temptation…
    Suddenly he walks pass me,
    And become the focus of the eye.

    How did the devil know so well?
    Was my desire outwardly expressed,
    My dislikes, my turn ons,
    What I wanted in the opposite sex?
    But God promised me,
    That I’ll have the desires of my heart…
    And He knows me……well…
    But I guess if he is going to have me,
    Committing sins with my eyes,
    Undressing him and being hypnotized,
    With what I think I see,
    Then it isn’t God,
    Even though as clear as day,
    He stands BEFORE ME,
    I guess he must not BE FOR ME…

    You candy for my eyes,
    I want you to hear me.
    Please don’t come near me,
    And whatever you do,
    Don’t touch,
    I’m just afraid that I’ll enjoy it too much.
    Help me out, and keep those lips closed.
    They might say words,
    To make me hot,
    And when that happens,
    Trust me it shows.
    So I’ll promise you,
    That never again will we meet…
    So I won’t have to worry about seeing you,
    Around town, at your house, between your sheets.
    I think I’m safe… I’m fine,
    I dodged that one….this time.
    I just had to get to the root,
    And erase your picture,
    From my mind.
     
  2. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :yo: Wow..Lemme read one more time...that was hot..Loved it..could picture it in my mind
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heads up, here comes another one.

    Very nicely done!
     
  4. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's real. Nice skrybe.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trying to keep that image out of your mind, don't want to linger too much on what you can't have. It's a battle when that candy looks sweet. I liked the way you brought this vibe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow ......whoaaaaaaaa!
    dis was red hot off da press
    very well done
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmm the chills my sista the spine tingling chills smh
    ^5 :)
     
  8. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I thank you all for your love....the same feeling u got reading this was the same feeling that I got when i was in this position. My scribe fulfilled its purpose. :jumping:
     
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    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: no other words needed............continue..... :court:
     
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