Quiet Poetry Lounge : Caressing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, May 17, 2003.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Caressing
    in the warm gentle soul
    we lay and hold close
    our heart in rapid beat
    a caressing love what a treat
    in the mental we pose a bond
    a magic gleam glow
    me and u together on da flo
    by the candle light
    spending some sweet tyme
    as we relax and unwined
    caressing
    ya mental thought
    caressing
    ya body too
    caressing
    ya dreams & faith
    here in my gentle grace
    caressing U .................
     
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    your gentleness is the blood that runs through my veins.
    visions of you reside in my dreams.
    my heart pumps erractically at the glimps of your presence
    spending time with you emotions unmeasured
    our minds have traveled far to reach one another
    come into my fortress so we can discover
    what it is that makes us both spiritual lovers
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Rich and PurpleMoons

    Both of those pieces were very nice.

    Rich you always bring the passion....

    PurpleMoons...great response.

    I :bowdown: to the both of you. I loved them.

    *I forgot I have to repond in a poetic flow...my bad.* :D

    The call and response was definitely on point
    One of the reason I come back to this joint
    Feelin' the Family's vibe
    Not to mention the :luvv: from each Member's scribe
    The passion and warmth is alive
    Poetry here ain't no jive
    That's why this place is the :bomb:
    Right here, on Destee.com


    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    purple......
    unto u with such grace
    a love of two all in faith
    caressing mental walls
    and da beckon of ya call
    as i step inside to feel ya treasure
    relax in my embraced measures
    of how i caress u to a warmth
    forth i bring ya dream alive
    in the motion of love of two
    just me & u
    together soon will be
    u just wait and see......come to me !
     
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    Rich that was beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it
     
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    Monetary........
    ya reply was on hit
    allow me to know
    ya heart in it
    caressing is the unity
    of love that pass through
    one's soul send warmth
    when da body cold
    caressing is da key
    thankz my brutha monetary !!!!!!
     
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    Yep, I'm with the Money Man... together, sparks was flyin' right tight!
     
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    Thankz 1poet .....
    caressing love and touch
    make us flow dis way
     
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    i love the passion of this
    very nice
     
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    Thankz angel in da sky
    under da wingz i fly
    to a dip of romacin
    as love faith be dancin
    inside da grace
    and warmth to ya face
    thank u
     
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