Black Poetry : Care-Less

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  1. msjulia2u

    msjulia2u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [CENTER]Care-less..


    What would you do if you knew, in 24 hours she’d stopped caring?

    What would you do if she just didn’t call any more?

    Would u miss her soft voice??

    Would u want to have her ask once more how are u?

    How was work??

    Is there anything you need?

    What can I do to help?

    What would you do if you never heard…

    If you need me I am right here..

    Would you miss her?

    Would you miss the way she could always seem to make you feel like you are the man, when you know in your heart you didn’t come close to measuring up.

    Would you miss how secure she could make you feel just from her mere presence?

    Would you miss how she could somehow take your day of total chaos,

    And breathe perfect peace on it?

    Would you miss the touch of her hand that could sooth any pain in your body?

    Would you miss being able to look into her eyes?

    Would you miss the smell of her perfume?

    What would you do if she cared and you didn’t know?



    Signed: ME



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  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, and if he would miss all those things, then he should step up and act like he knows, right? Still making me think of that saying about not missing your water until....So, so true poet. Steppin in my head once more...Truly enjoying your work.
     
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    IntuitioninMD Banned MEMBER

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    the if(s) in life

    Concentrating on the if(s) of how a person feels in a relationship. So often - people do not think about the if(s) until the relationship is over. Too bad people cannot have an "if" implant right into their hearts in the beginning.

    Very nice piece. :)
     
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    ya pen on fire i love da flowz wow!
     
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