Black Poetry : Care 2 Dance?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, May 13, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Anyone care to
    dance
    with me
    inside this
    page
    entitled
    Sweet
    P
    O
    E
    T
    R
    Y
    Gliding carefully
    so as not to step
    on your toes,
    nor you on
    mine

    Slow grinding
    two words
    at a
    time

    Taking my
    breath away
    when you
    dip me
    into a
    feather hold
    enrapturing
    my
    Lyrical pirouette
    whirling
    on one foot
    and seeing
    dance as
    a rhythm
    of language
    written and spoken

    Throwing
    shadows
    on a screen
    Restoring
    traditional
    ways of life
    through
    prose-filled
    movements
    of word play
    and posture

    Can you cut
    a rug for me
    by verbally
    tossing
    out
    para phrases
    two-stepping
    into
    the future

    Inscriptions
    of modern
    dance
    how elegant
    a gesture~

    ....anyone
    Care 2 Dance?


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Can I Have this dance?

    Can I have this dance?
    Do I need to Arabesque ?
    Plie'? Salsa? Samba? Lambada?
    or Tango to get tangled in the
    rhythm of poetic words with you

    I don't want to step on your
    toes so do we need to Hustle
    or Slide? I guess it doesn't really
    matter because it's the same dance
    anyway

    You mentioned two-step
    is that a new dance that has two
    steps to understand your verses
    If it is "one - two"
    now I'm closer to you and I
    enjoy what's in between the letters

    hands interlocked with our prints
    connecting as if mine was a cast for yours
    we dance

    this adagio along amythyst adjectives
    is

    outstanding!
    fantastic!
    magnificent!
    divine!

    moving with you, minds syncopated
    to common thoughts, has our bodies
    locked into the others motion so
    I / mirror you and you / mirror me
    synchronized to the metronomed
    "tick - tock" of pens chasing
    each other in the fields
    of poetry

    until we grow tired of dancing
    the truth on the college ruled floor.


    N2....well never mind. This ish was the (moderator bleeped word)!

    one love,blak
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I'm convinced Blak~

    You are cra Z to want to dance with me.....but I'll pass and step
    aside while you
    get your groove on -- with your bad *** on this dance
    floor --

    We'll call you the Cum-Bak KID. :D

    Love ya' doll face ~
     
  4. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sure

    Dance with you...I don't care.
    We can dance anywhere.

    In the street...on packaged meat.
    In the square around a mare.
    Or on the car eating candy bars.

    Dance with you...I don't care.
    We can dance anywhere..

    We can dance so many styles...
    Let's do some moves...
    but it'll take a while.

    We can do the boogy....
    or the electric slide...no stepping on toes...
    cause we will be side by side.

    Or we can do the tootsie roll...
    Boy!!! Here we go.. here we go...

    Round and Round and back and forth...
    Shake shake...twist twist...back and forth
    a beat we won't miss....

    Cause like words on paper....they can't shake us...
    Dancing our rythmic moves...from the floor to the paper....
     
  5. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    CERTAINLY !!

    LOVE THIS ....COMPLETELY !!!

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Neak Neak~

    I see you like to "dance" too... Do ya' thang ma!

    I'm glad you could show ya' movez & skillz here by
    converging on into this piece and spinning out with
    ya' flavorful flow....

    Do ya' thang gurlfriend!


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  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GYPSY~

    Thank you for "loving this completely"...
    Your wordz are very much appreciated!


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  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HEY! HEY!!

    SAVE DA LAST DANCE 4 ME


    AS DA MUSIC PLAY
    AND WE DANCE THE
    POETIC NIGHT AWAY
    SLIP & SLIDE TO A FLOW
    GET READY 4 DES POETRY
    FLOW

    I PROMISE NOT TO TIP YA TOES
    JUST FLOSS MY PATTEN LEATHER SHOES
    TO DANCE WIT U I CAN NOT LOSE
    U KNOW THE RULES AND DA TOOLS
    SO BABY LETS (((SWING))) SHAKE & ROLL
    IN TUNES ACROSS DA ROOM IN MOTION

    SAVE THE LAST DANCE 4 ME!!!:roll: :wink: :wave:
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    You got it sweetie~pie!!

    Thanks for the read
    and for dancing with
    this piece a little bit!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MOST WELCOME MY QUEEN
    OF POETIC LOVE DANCE
    (((((SWINGING))))))):D
     
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