Quiet Poetry Lounge : Caramel and Hot Sauce, Part 1

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    A perfect blend
    of spicy and sweet
    from the crown on his head
    to the soles of his feet
    Brown sugar bear melted into
    a syrupy confection of perfection
    such a warm heart oozing
    with compassion and affection
    Flaming jalapeno
    chili pepper sensuality
    Tantalizing temptations
    blazing into my reality
    Caramel and hot sauce...
    such an unexpected treat
    personified in this perfect blend
    of spicy and sweet
     
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    what a treat da two be
    cascading deep & beneath
    manifesting caramel drip
    hot sauce blend of feast
    warm divine & tantalize
    together mesmerize a bliss
    sweet temping mix of thrill

    whewwwww! dis was fire & desire
     
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    Tempting and thrilling
    caramel is ready,
    able, and willing
    to satisfy a sweet tooth
    while hot sauce adds a dash
    of flammable spice, the mix of the
    two sets off this passionate splash

    Thank you Rich for responding so.
     
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    You know I bet that would be good on some chicken. Hot sauce and caramel I don't know why I didn't think of that before. Thanks for the cooking idea and super flow!
     
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    Well, it probably would taste good on some chicken, lol, although that never entered my mind. Thank you brotha Tha-Emissary.
     
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    mixture of heated bliss
    a dash of hot sauce kiss
    ova da caramel twist
    ready to feast da treat
    food for da soul ............most welcome
     
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    Sweet yet spicy
    like soothing chai tea
    Caramel and hot sauce
    a honey peppered elixir for me

    Thanks again brotha Rich.
     
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    Love that flow in this poem. I got all wrapped up in the flow of the poem then the responses. Tight poem!
     
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    Thank you Wisdom7, glad to know that you got all wrapped up in the flow of this poet.
     
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